Sunday, 5 June 2022

Summer Solstice at The Grave of Anne Bronte. (Revised).

Those good folk who know the worth of books
Have given Anne a new memorial,
A plaque resistant to the coastal storms
That have pitted the original limestone slab
With savage cuts and scars
Gouging deep a once immaculate surface.
The words I could decipher when a child
Transformed into gritty knots of lead.

The new memorial is a plain and simple plaque
That names her father, but not her two great novels,
And thus replicates the original injustice
Against her creativity and gender.
I sit beside the grave and try to come to terms
With how everything that makes a life worth living
Eventually breaks apart. But I can never be a stoic
And accept all that I value has no meaning.

A group of listless tourists, tied to an agenda,
Tick their check lists as they dawdle by.
I suspect Anne Bronte is just a name to them,
The girl who did not write Wuthering Heights.

Anne is the sister too often underrated,
But she was the toughest of her clan,
Speaking sharp and fierce to those folk
Who hate the truth when it is clearly spoken.
Her honesty has brought me to this hilltop
To sit and mourn her youth, but also to imagine
That I can be as honest as she was,
And not to hold my tongue when life gets brutal.


Trevor Joh Karsavin Potter.
First drafts, 26th. - 28th. 2017. - July 11th. - 12th. 2018. 
Rewritten June 5th. - 6th. 2022. 
I first drafted this poem in Scarborough in 2017, but I was very tired having been working hard at a conference the previous few days so I only managed to produce a very rough sketch. The second draft was still a very rough version and I left it thus until I should feel ready and able to work on it again. Thus five years later I have come up with this much more concise version that I do like, and is more or less the poem that I originally hoped to write.

Tuesday, 31 May 2022

Trevor J Potter's Art: Pas de Deux. (Revised).

Trevor J Potter's Art: Pas de Deux. (Revised).: Gentle - soft - voice. Swans on the wing under the moon. I put down the receiver, turn off the light, set the alarm for 7am. Waitin...

Monday, 30 May 2022

Saturday, 21 May 2022

Waiting Too Long For Jo. (Completed Poem).


Listening for you to ring the bell 
Puts my nerves on edge,
And I can never guess your mood 
From one hour to the next.
Waiting has always been - for me - 
A pointless occupation. - Perhaps you disagree.

Old trees in our garden do not count the days,
They are far too busy reaching for the sun.
The axe will not concern them until it splits the bark.
As always, waiting proves to be a pointless occupation. 

I am waiting for you to cease prevaricating.
Either move back here or stay put by the roadside
In that run down caravan with a smashed in window.
You rely too much on hauliers shifting fags and readies.

Sharing a meal with you is not a problem,
But under my roof please, not in a rural layby
Where lorries double park, their motors running.
Such deprivation rots the prize of freedom.
Waiting for you should not be be such a bind.
If we wait much longer I may prove to be unkind.

I love my freedom too, but in ways that enhance living,
Tending the shrubs and trees - watching the young fruit ripen,
Not cadging coke and pasties from unsuspecting strangers.
The cards are on the table Jo. -  Step up and show your hand.

It seems to me that waiting is an endgame occupation. 
I guess you disagree.

Trevor John Karsavin Potter.
21st.- 22nd. - 23rd. May - 26th. - 2022.
Getting the tone right was not easy writing this poem.

Tuesday, 17 May 2022

Sabatha of the Twenty Eight Stars, (2nd. Rewrite. New longer version Completed).

Dissolving blank masks in bitter tears
I meet your eyes, blue and piercing,
seeing me as I truly am.

Debussy on the radio
reminds me that your home in France
may soon become a distant memory.

And my favourite view of central Paris?
An umbered text book photograph
pressed between frayed, wine stained covers.

I have seen all things we both held dear
despoiled by pampered narcissists
disguised as caring politicians.

Religion can also seem divisive.
You meditate. I wear a cross.
Two customs often mocked - derided
by folk who only view our masks
and not the truths that live beneath them.

But hope burns deeper than politicking.
It seems hope is a child of love,
not of deceit and subterfuge.
Tyrants enforce passports and visas,
but cannot stop strangers becoming friends.

Thus it was for us when we first met
in a time of conflict and revolutions
when governments feared freedom of thought.
You smiled. I crossed the line to greet you.

Language is not a problem for us,
and customs are only shadow boxing,
so when I phoned you late last night,
your sad face flickering on the screen,
I knew that we are safe and well

and strongly bound together.
Love cannot be destroyed by loss,
or faith by separation.

Trevor John Karsavin Potter.
First Version: July 29th. 2016. - April 20th. 2020.
Ne Rewritten version: May 17th. - 18th. - 28th. 2022.
Umbered means seen through firelight in the context of this poem. The fires that ravaged Notre Dame de Paris; also the fires of Brexit and religious disharmony.

Winter Night.